Critique of Where Pigeons Roost

My son chose my book Where Pigeons Roost and other stories for a high school English class assignment. He had to read and analyse the book, then write a critique of it. He earned a grade of 84% for the following critique:

They did not yet know that this was as good as it got. 

-Excerpt from Stalemate, from “Where Pigeons Roost and other stories” 

Where Pigeons Roost and other stories is a collection of short stories by self-published Franco-Ontarian author AM Matte. Though they are all very different stories, they are all related by the same theme of inevitable grief. It has a lot of dark humor and subtlety in all its stories. Due to the unique presentation of this book, this review will go through and rate each story individually. 

ABÎME: A popular actress is reading a book by her ex-husband about the affair she was having with the contractor who was renovating their home. As she finishes reading, she decides to go make things right with her ex.  

This is an interesting story about betrayal and hatred. It was interesting how the protagonist’s mind went back and forth on her opinions about her ex-husband and how she should deal with her feelings. Wasn’t all that interesting, safe for a few funny moments. 6.5/10 

STALEMATE: Two sisters, Feather and Gaelyn that are in their late 50s seemingly hate each other, but must keep face due to, one, living together, and two, having to seem happy when they have guests over. Oh, and they also want to kill each other, for reasons that are entirely avoidable and, dare I say, stupid. Feather attempts to murder her sister simply because she said something about the woman who got with the man she wanted to get with. Gaelyn had literally no idea. Feather apologises, and life goes back to normal. (Yes, that’s actually what happens) 

This is an interesting piece of dark comedy in this book. Seeing Feather slowly become more and more enraged with her sister, without the latter even knowing what’s going on, is definitely funny. 7/10 

Where Pigeons Roost: The titular story of the book, this is a tale about a young woman named Mykle who participates in an underground “sport” known as “Pigeon Thwacking”, which is… exactly what it sounds like. Basically, every year there is a competition to see who can thwack the most pigeons. Each pigeon equals one point. Whoever has the highest point total wins that year’s competition. Toyosi, the reigning champion of the sport, is evidently cheating, since he’s always ahead of Mykle by just a little bit. Mykle’s plan is to just beat up the same group of pigeons for an entire year, but during this massacre she stupidly slips and cracks her skull open, dying in the process… but not before writing her final point total on the ground with her blood: 22158 

This is a really fun story, with high stakes and fun storytelling. The ending is somewhat disappointing, due to her death due to pigeons. Personally, I was hoping for Mykle to become the true, rightful champion and to expose Toyosi for his fraudulent ways in the process. Then again, I don’t think that we, as readers, are supposed to be rooting for this obviously flawed protagonist. Nonetheless, still a great read! 10/10

Overall, you could call this a triple-a book; that is, a book about Adultery, Attempted murder and Avicide. Each story brings something different to the table, but they all circle back to the same theme: how people handle (or fail to handle) grief and disappointment. While not every story hits equally hard, the collection is bold and unafraid to be weird, which works in its favor. I rate this book 9 stars out of 10. Would recommend.*

*emphasis mine

A Reading Begets Another

I participated in the Toronto Writers’ Co-operative’s 7th Exchanging Notes Literary Cabaret a few weeks ago, where I read my creative non-fiction piece Countdown. It’s about my grandmother’s last years with us, during which we rediscovered our relationship through the lens of Alzheimer Disease. My reading was accompanied by John Priest on the violin.

A photo and tweet about my reading from writing partner and good friend Sophie Tolias.
A photo and tweet about my reading from writing partner and good friend Sophie Tolias.

 

Following the Cabaret reading, I got an email from fellow writer Amy S. Mark, inviting me to read Countdown and another excerpt (I’ve opted to read from my short story collection Where Pigeons Roost) at the Indie authors’ Wordjammin’ 2015 event this weekend:

A Celebration of Independent Authors

Join some of Canada’s best indie authors 
as they read excerpts from their works.

Sunday, March 15, 2015

2:00 — 6:00 pm

Yellow Griffin Pub

2202 Bloor Street West

(just steps from the Runnymede subway station)

Find out more about the authors reading at the Wordjamm here: http://www.wordjamm.com/authors-bios.html.

I’ll be reading at 4:55 p.m. I don’t know what the audience will think of the contrast between a staccato yet touching retelling of a loved one’s demise and the dark humour of killing pigeons for sport – I suppose death is an inadvertent theme, here – but I am looking forward to finding out. Each author’s Wordjamm reading is followed by a question-and-answer session from the audience. I’ll share how it goes in an upcoming post.

Pigeons Go Wild – Book Launch

What better spot than a wing place to launch a book boasting a pigeon on its cover?

On Wednesday, November 20th, 2013, from 5:30 p.m. to 7 p.m., please join me as I launch my short collection of stories, Where Pigeons Roost, at Wild Wing, 431 Yonge Street in Toronto, just south of College subway station.

Those attending the launch will get half price appetizers with the purchase of a drink, and a copy of the book for over 10% off the cover price.

See you there!

Cover of short story collection Where Pigeons Roost, featuring a photgraph of pigeons strutting about on a sunny pavement.
The cover of Where Pigeons Roost.

Where Pigeons Roost – now available

Very excited to announce that I have approved the proof of my short story collection, and that Where Pigeons Roost and other stories is now available through me and through Amazon!

Cover page of short story collection Where Pigeons Roost, featuring a photgraph of pigeons strutting about on a sunny pavement.
The cover page of Where Pigeons Roost, designed by Maria Buscemi

In Where Pigeons Roost, four women trapped in worlds of their own making journey between obsession and redemption.

« Feather and Gaelyn reached the foyer, not yet knowing that each would remain disappointed by her life while being secretly pleased her twin would fare no better. They did not yet know that their final competition – whom would outlive the other – would be moot, the winner forever undeclared. » – Excerpt from Stalemate, from Where Pigeons Roost

The book’s official launch will be held in November in Toronto, Canada. Details to follow!